by Atomic Jan 22, 2006
category :
Friendship, family /
family
Did you see me, daddy? |
by Not Enough
Wow, that's amazing. It's incredibly sad. But I love it. I love the story, and the way it was written. Very well done. The flow was amazing. The rhymes were perfect. the whole idea of the poem almost made me cry. Good job. |
by Marcus blake
This is just deep damn your crazy amazing 5/5. |
by Isis
It's beautiful! |
by KayTOTS
Aww. thats so sad, i love it. =[ |
Wonderfully written peice, great form and flow. the structure really adds strengh to the peice and the emotions are very strong. |