Holy man this is a good poem, gave me goose bumps at the end

Oh my Bill,
As I am reading each stanza I can almost hear me saying aloud "OUCH" all the way through .....lol

Great piece Bill , hope I can sleep tonight after this one......I still have visions of : Knee to the scrote.....OUCHIE !!!!

WOW! Chilling and intense. A superb write... Satin is right, you should write a book!

You know, one day I am going to see a book with collection of poems in it, and I want the first autograph. Sensational, Bill.

Intense and raw! Very nice, you have such an amazing way with words. A truly exceptional piece. Keep it up~Holly

Wow! That's amazing, again!

Wow. This poem was cool, and it has an awesome neding. Ha, it was scary, a little, but...awesome ending. The imagery was great, I could see it all happening as I read it, and the flow was awesome. Great job.