Control Your Soul

Control your soul - such a beautiful way to express what one must do to be right in the world. beautiful expressions and a poignant message.

happy writing
shobhana

Mr. Bill;

Lately, i have come across poems that have managed to inpact my life someway or another. Its amazing how easily words can change your presective on things and help you let many things go that at one point you just thought you couldn't. I want to thank you for posting this poem and i am grateful i came across this poem when i did because i needed to read something like this to let me know that everything is going to be okay. I admire your prespective on life and your words of wisdome absolutely amazing poem.....
take care always
Miss.Scooby

Terrific write there Bill!!! I really loved this one. The flow and the message were superb. Especially the last stanza. Well done, guy!

Wow.good job
evey man should read that poem
and may they truly know the meaning of a great man.
very good job

Beautifully done and so darn true! Excellent, I love it! Great job, Bill! ;o)