I wish people would stop it!

by Amanda   Jan 22, 2006


I wish people would stop it,
stop always knocking me down,
It doesn't bring me a smile,
only a tear and a frown,

I wish people would stop it,
shouting this abuse at me,
those words rip me to shreds,
If only this, they could see,

I wish people would stop it,
Hitting and marking my skin,
it doesn't just damage the outside,
also damages my body deep within,

I wish people would stop it,
ignoring my pleas and my cries,
Everytime these things happen,
a part of me inside just dies!

Copyright 2006 - Amanda Linzi

I'm just fed up. Thanks for reading :(

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  • 18 years ago

    by master of shadow

    Very expressive and well written.

    5/5

  • 18 years ago

    by xEmmax

    Wow, brilliant poem, i loved it, really expresses ur emotions. 5/5! and thanku for the comment,
    take care,
    xxEmmaxx

  • 18 years ago

    by dora

    0h huni this was really deep..very sad and t0uching..

  • 18 years ago

    by Fay

    I really love your poem, i think its great and it touched me a lot.

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