Great wrok victoria, i was off for much time so didnt post an poem and i guess coming back perfectly b reading ur poem. great work. do read mine too

Vic it's so sad. but can you imagin a tree in the middle in a desert birds come and have a rest on her branches and the leave her alone! over and over and over.....

This is another good poem, capitalize some of the words, but they are still good, 5/5!!!

Only few people know how they can describe a story in a poem n u r no doubt among those , for ur this poem i have given u 5th rating..No matter this poem gives a lil wrong expression as it allows other to go extreme for their love if their love is true..But its a good talent of urs !