Great job, i love that you tied the opening with the ending. I wonder how different the world would be if people stopped to ponder this. humans are going to blow up the earth, and who's going to stop them? take care
JL

Awww rainy u r so rite! we'll be their voice dont worry!
~save the animals hug a tree, kiss with your lips painted with strawberrys~
i'm an emo hippie! w00t
luv u always rainy, ur my most fav lil sis i could ever have no one else could take ur place. i sugest u listen to this song called "unwitten" by natasha, its very inspiriing.
kk ttyl luv you~
wolfy hooowwwwwll

This has such a good point. i absolutly love the last time. its a perfect ending to a good poem.