Comments : Your Actions and Promises are Temporary Lies...

  • 18 years ago

    by creeesta

    This is a really well written poem. It's short but has a lasting empression. :)

  • 18 years ago

    by flawed diamond

    I love this. This last two lines really stood out for me. Good job.

  • 18 years ago

    by Sudds

    What was only a wile?