Life

by Hareem   Jan 22, 2006


Great blessings are bestowed upon mankind
So many in number, hard to bear in mind
Yet, on fate as the time carves acerbic remarks
Around the girth of sentiments the lives wind

Among the options we have to make a choice
And often the ones endearing, we must sacrifice
If for an affection, we willingly burn through hell
For the sake of other we put ourselves on ice

Why is life made so complicated
Why does truth have to be edited
While the ones loving with honour, are to be left behind
Why those who affront us must be uplifted

The hardships, aggression, endeavour and pain
Going through the war of emotions, what is the gain
A simple end it is to the intricate life
We take nothing along hereafter, all is gone in vain

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  • 18 years ago

    by Hina

    Had you worked harder on the name of this piece of work, more and more people would want to read it. Notice how the most profound poete, have stunning and attractive titles. You deserve the right to do that, you write so very well.

    Good luck in all you do...

    Hina

  • 18 years ago

    by The Wingless

    But wait, I can't say that I LOVE the format

  • 18 years ago

    by The Wingless

    Haha I have nothing really to say. I agree with all the other people who commented. Awesome poem.

    I'm mad at you, because your poems are so awesome, I can't even help you anymore. Lol.

    Great work.

  • 18 years ago

    by Live, Laugh, Love

    Wow.. Another amazing poem... Great job.. You are truely talented....

  • 18 years ago

    by nobody truly knows me

    Great poem. you have a lot of talent, keep writing. 5/5.