I love it excellent poem 5/5

Really well written peice, flows very well.

Great poem. you have a lot of talent, keep writing. 5/5.

Wow.. Another amazing poem... Great job.. You are truely talented....

Haha I have nothing really to say. I agree with all the other people who commented. Awesome poem.

I'm mad at you, because your poems are so awesome, I can't even help you anymore. Lol.

Great work.

But wait, I can't say that I LOVE the format

Had you worked harder on the name of this piece of work, more and more people would want to read it. Notice how the most profound poete, have stunning and attractive titles. You deserve the right to do that, you write so very well.

Good luck in all you do...

Hina