Sunshine After the Rain (Diamante)

by HOLLY ARMER   Jan 22, 2006


Rain
dreary, bleak
falling splashing weeping
gloomy desolate-hopeful bright
shining beaming glimmering
radiant, luminous
sunshine

*I'm not sure if this is exactly right. It's still a work in progress.

**Diamante
Line 1:
one word
(subject/noun that is contrasting to line 7)

Line 2:
two words
(adjectives) that describe line 1

Line 3:
three words
(action verbs) that relate to line 1

Line 4:
four words (nouns)
first 2 words relate to line 1
last 2 words relate to line 7

Line 5:
three words
(action verbs) that relate to line 7

Line 6:
two words
(adjectives) that describe line 7

Line 7:
one word
( subject/noun that is contrasting to line 1)

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  • 18 years ago

    by Angie

    Wow, I love it Holly..... great style and beautiful write. I've been trying new styles myself, so I must give this one a try. Wonderful......

    Smiles, Hugs and Love, Angela

  • 18 years ago

    by Phoebe

    Great ^^

  • 18 years ago

    by Amanda Bee

    You nailed it and I loved it! Magnificent peice. I am going to have to try this form myself.

  • 18 years ago

    by Lu

    OMG Holly ,
    I haven't a clue if it is right either but I absolutly love it ...
    Sounds like a very difficult style to write but I think I will have to try also.
    What a wonderful share , Holly

  • 18 years ago

    by Jacklyn

    Oo i like it. i think this is the new style in the club we are working on that i haven't gotten around to looking at. well done! love it! this is the first of it's kind that i have read.

    ~Jacklyn

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