End It

by ShaeBaeBae   Jan 22, 2006


To judge our friends
Never ends
To free our nation
Is no vacation
To be free
Free at last
Still may not
Change our past
To fight for freedom
To fight for your right
To see them all
In the night
You close your eyes
You fall to sleep
To have a dream
Is your keep
United we stand
Let's all grab a hand
And hold them tight
Look at them
Look at the light
To catch the message
Just close your eyes
Because every time you blink
A soldier somewhere dies

I wrote this when the war started in Iraq

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  • 18 years ago

    by Jesslyn

    I like this but i would just like to say on the poem of mine you commented on-we're still together he had to leave for work- i miss him very much but we still love each other. good job tho

  • 18 years ago

    by Kylead

    Nice poem i am goin to iraq soon myself anyhow it was a spider on my poem sleep tight and this is nice because soldier myself 5/5 ( yur peom a war was fought was alot better though)

  • 18 years ago

    by The Poetic Child

    Thank you for your comment..my thing is...Where is Childrens Publisher's or w/e at..and how can i get to it.thank you for the help though i appreciate it...

  • 18 years ago

    by The Poetic Child

    That was Deep...EXCELLENT EXCELLENT EXCELLENT EXCELLENT..truly one of the best ones i've read...thanx for your comment i apprecaited it
    ttyl sometime
    5/5
    PeAcE
    ~The Poet~

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