I love it so deep and so sad

Sorry this has happened to your cusin, but this poem is very well written. i love it!

Sorry this has happened to your cusin, but this poem is very well written. i love it!

Hope your cousin will be ok, young children seem to have an uncanny ability with dealing with things so hopfully theyu will be.

the poem is very well written, the flow and structure are very good and the story behind it very clear.

Oh my god! so tradgic...
but it was very good writen...dark and sad...really hope it isn't true...great poem though

This is so sad yet such a good poem, if that makes sense. love that it's short yet so powerful. brilliant xx

Oh wow. What a horrid thing to do! Well written poem though 5/5

I could feel all of the emotion.

I feel the pain and saddness like tht was me!
now thts a deep poem

Short and to the point - a very good write. I don't know if its true or fictional, but either way - it happens in real life and I feel for those who have to go through it.

The only constructive criticism I can think of - the ending can have more power - perhaps saying something about how the rapist stole his smiles (just as the innocence was stolen).

Still, nicely done 5/5

~Tara

Very to the point and very short...it was a great write. if it's fictional then it was deep.
5/5

REVS

The poem was so sad! i'm sorry that it happened to your cos!
5/5