Comments : Our First...

  • 18 years ago

    by BeautifulDisaster

    AW thats so cute, i loved how personal it was with the rabbits and stuff, aw, so beautiful hun, you are very talented keep on writing, loved this poem though its very emotional and exxpressivee, welldone once again,take care,xxoo

  • 18 years ago

    by dora

    0hh that was really g0od. a heartfelt piece., very wel written. =)

    l0ve always d0ra
    -*x00o00x*-

  • Oh my god...im like crying rite now...i love this poem...and wow...i feel like this alot of these dayz..cuz of miguel...u know how i always am...well i love ya mama....5/5

  • 18 years ago

    by Lu

    This poem is just so incredibly sweet ..
    You can feel the love just pouring out of each and every word.
    Lovely piece my dear , just lovely

  • 18 years ago

    by Cuddles

    Awww, that's so sweet! You're excellent at this! Never quit writing. I love your work.

  • 18 years ago

    by melly xx

    AWWWWWWWWWW
    THIS POEM IS SO CUTE
    BRINGS BACK SOME JOYFUL MEMORIES
    LOL
    5/5 TO THE MAXX
    MEL ♥

  • 18 years ago

    by uniquepreciouss

    AWW thats soo beautiful

  • 18 years ago

    by Flower Child[hippie]

    Awww this is really good

    an i dont know how to do the lil contest things i always wanted to do em tho