I really liked this read. It flowed nicely and undisturbed.
Just one suggestion...
I realize there's nowhere to turn
I only wish to be home.
I pray for my lord,
Not to let my soul roam.
I have accepted the fact that the end is near
The use of I is very repetitive.
you could always try something like...
I realize there's nowhere to turn
Only wishing to be home.
As I pray for my lord,
Not to let my soul roam.
I have accepted the fact that the end is near
Jus a few suggestions I am sure you could come up with more.
Other than that I loved the write. It was a touching read! 5/5