The Wall

by Melissa S. Masucci   Jan 22, 2006


I awaken,
as if from a dream...
a dream in which
I built a wall.

I would peer beyond it
and others would peer in.
But the wall never budged.
I was always on the inside,
alone.

I've finally found a way
to let go my hold on the wall.
Today I walked away.

It has crashed,
my eyes now open.
And I awaken,
as if from a dream.

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  • 18 years ago

    by Biscuit

    Vrey symbolic, i like how u repeat 'as if from a dream' it concludes the poem nicely xx

  • 18 years ago

    by Mousie

    That was a really different way of putting it, and I really liked it... nice job... you definitely have some talent... keep it up!

  • 18 years ago

    by Natalie

    Short and GREAT. I'm really liking your poetry. =) And though this one was small, It went pretty well. I actually liked it alot. Keep it up. And thank you for your comment.s 5/5

    `Taleeee. xx.

    P.S I'm adding you to my favourites =)

  • 18 years ago

    by sweetiepie18

    This has an interesting style that almost entrances the reader to read on.

    thanks for commenting on my poem.
    let me know what you think of my other stuff and i'l return the favour.

    xox

  • 18 years ago

    by StormShadow

    A really cool and soft poem, with a interesting story and a nice finish.

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