Beauty faded threw a rose

by Bleeding_Red_Fallen_Angel   Jan 22, 2006


This beautiful rose
Has come to fade
With every longing
Stride that was made

It fell from the heaven
In which it was born
Now living a life
To which it will morn

Bleeding is this rose
That lived out its lie
Striking just a pose
In order to get by

Sticking with the crowed
Longing to be free
But those dreams cannot come true
As it wont come to see

Its heart is cold and black
Fading out its dye
For the love that it shall lack
And the tears it shall cry

Burned is the beauty
That once ran threw its veins
Now it pours down
Threw the spirit that it tames

Dead is this love
That heaven once had made
When push came to shove
Its spirit could only fade

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  • 18 years ago

    by Fluffy

    A well expressed piece. Innovation lingered throughout the poem which shows the extent of your imagination. Simply great =).

    Well done and keep it up.

    God bless
    -Elysium.

    P.S: Thanks for the comment- it’s much appreciated =).

  • 18 years ago

    by Avellana

    Dead is this love
    That heaven once had made''

    The detail in your poems is immense.

    Lv A, x

  • 18 years ago

    by Angie

    So much emotion within this write, beautifully written.

    Smiles, Hugs and Love, Angela

  • 18 years ago

    by Leona

    WOW great job 5/5
    and keep up the good work
    Leona

  • 18 years ago

    by BeautifulDisaster

    Wow this is breathtaking hun, I LOVE IT, very descriptive and with a lot of emotion, you are such a talented writer everytime i read your poetry i smile or cry, but in a good way hehe, wow, amazing, just absolutely amazing, take care,xxoo

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