Comments : Whats Wrong With The World

  • 18 years ago

    by brady haupt

    WOW!!! That was incredible. Its incredibly real, 5/5

  • 18 years ago

    by Passionate

    Hey good job, its all so true, actually it sucks cuz its so true. good one tho, been waitin for you to write! later

  • 18 years ago

    by Ruthie

    Yea... true. I agree with ever single word... I'd love it if u read my poem small... u don't have to lol but im kind of exploring the same ideas. anyway... I really liked it. good job... keep writing ce KEEP WRITING! lol

  • 18 years ago

    by Ruthie

    Ha ha ha!! hang on!! I just remembered uv already commented on that one *blushes* seriously.. how dumb can I get! lol... i'm so embarresed now! lol... I'm gonna leave now!

  • 18 years ago

    by The Wingless

    It's content is awesome. Stuff like that is so true, but I'm going to be honest.

    I really really dislike the format.
    I don't think that it should stretch all the way across the screen like that. But, it's up to you. Try breaking it down a little.

  • 18 years ago

    by Always4You

    Ive read that once before..right when i first came to this site..but i never commented..I just want you to know CE that those things are exactly true..And im glad you realized them, because many in this world dont. We are so blind to what goes on around us..Great job 5/5!!
    ~Always4You~

  • 18 years ago

    by Jelz;; Oh,KillMeFast

    Hey ..!!

    Thanks for that comment, means bunches..!!

    Well, this poem caught my eye and ... i'm speeck-less. It's really hard to write all the problems of this pathetic world. But you wrote the most important, and hurful ones. Lol, you deserve and applaud ..!! By the way, nice use of words ..!!

    Jelz;; Oh,KillMeFast

  • 18 years ago

    by robin milford

    I agree with this poem totally. I loved it. I really thought it was neat that u said sorry for being the one to tell us the truth. That was awesome. Thanks for comment on "The letter" and yes I really did write the letter I refer to in that poem.

  • 17 years ago

    by Cathy

    Great poem! And so true.

  • 17 years ago

    by raven147

    That is such an open and honest poem! Good work!