Comments : Deepest thoughts from a broken heart

  • 18 years ago

    by Roulin

    I love the way this poem flows, be careful to keep your work running smooth!

  • 16 years ago

    by Polly

    Absolutely love this! My favourite thing about this poem is how it seems to change theme or mood within the lines. Like the first three are really warming and beautiful, the next the opposite, and then I especially love these lines
    Love deserts me
    And Faith is so hard to find ....

    anyway great work! 5/5 x

  • 11 years ago

    by WintersAngel

    I love this piece. The emotion in it is evident. Great poem.

  • 11 years ago

    by CathyButterflyJC

    Wow, this is incredible, wonderful poem, I love it!!!

  • 11 years ago

    by La Reina De Corazones

    Wow i wanted to cry since the pain was all there and the work you did was flawless!!! :) 5/5

    Queen Ashlin