You have such a glasslike tone in this piece that i just love.
it feels so tormented.
this was a truely beautiful piece.
keep it up!
5/5

Great poem i loved it!!!!!!!!!!!

You never fail to please me no matter what kind of poem
your friend Michael

Hi Haley just finished reading your latest poem, and I want to mull it over in my mind some before I write a comment. I did enjoy reading it very much, so I want to make sure that I write a comment that is worthy of your poem. as always Harry

Hi hayley, just noticed your poem, i'd like to give it some thought too.

hope you and your man are well and happy. keep in touch.

jay

Very stimulating piece...well written and well played. Keep up the good work. Oh, and later today I hope to finish part three of the "Lady of the Night" series I've been working on. Check it out if you get a chance.

Brad
Champagne

Mmmmm dreamy, you have such a vivid imagination Hayley, how i do envy you.

i'm glad it's getting the praise it deserves.

the first of your favoured three line stanzas lulled me into a bit of a false sense of security, the pace seemed slow and there was nothing to fear, then the poem really took off, leading me on the dark ride you so enjoy sending me on.

well done hayley.

Hayley
You always write so beautiful....truly a well written piece.

love ya, Ann

Hayley,

Whenever I turn to your poems, you never disappoint. Always something well writtien and this no exception.

Warmest regards,

Steve

Nice job hayley, I have thought about this poem for about a week now, and am stuck for the proper words I want to say, I was completely caught up in the poem, and knew the ending before i got to the 5th line, maybe it is because I am getting used to your style, though I knew the ending, I didnt know how you were going to get there, and you did it with your usual class, I always enjoy your poems, and your thoughts, keepup the great work as always Harry

Wow, great work....I seriously need to think of better comments. I always read such great work adn thast all I can describe it with.
If you've got any spare time check out my poem "Gabriel", because I would love to know your thoughts of it.

Darkest Wishes,
Matt

Very talented. i love the way in which u designed the poem. it's mysterious too

good luck

You had a unique way in putting this poem. a good poem indeed.

keet it up,
just wishes