WOW ur poem is realy good. I feal so bad and i hop that is not how u really feal

Wow that poems really good...

Thanx for commenting on mine too! means a lot!

-LiSa

Ok, so even though you did use a quote thats been around for a while, i like how you tunred it into a poem. Deep, passionate words. I knwo the pain and it seem sliek when you can relate to a poet....things make more sense. so, nice job on this one, too

Excellent

DAM u've got so much talent ur words flow together so well....you can feel the pain coming out of the words u write keep it up ur an amazing writter
can't wait to read more..but i hope ur doing ok ur poems are so sad
auna

This poem is really great, it makes a person wanna cry, it was easy to feel the love you had for the one that broke your heart.