Oh gosh poet that was really beautiful. I wrote a daddy poem but yea no that good!... I really loved this one keep up the good work hun... it really was a great piece... *hugs*

Yay ! It's longer!

This is so good, but there was so much to figure out, i read the poem many times before i figured out 1/10th of the poem. It's great.

Keep up the good work.

Or I am stupid. I don't know.

Uhhhh this is soo sad!!!!! iam so sorry for that.. you write soo beautifully, such a great poet!! 5/5 4 sure