This is a great poem. I love it. You sure know how to describe your love. Excellent work.

Great vocabulary in that poem! perfect wording and flow! why cant mine have the same flow! hmm..ill get there! keep writting and inspiring me! ta

Yo, like what you did to it.

Aken Sol

Breathtaking imagery and flawless wordplay. Overall, simply brilliant. Take care and keep it up~Holly

DIGEC--- WOW another masterpiece from your lips to the paper who is this about???? a nameless girl?? why is she nameless.....well great job again!! **soleil

More calming than the leaves of fall
and warmer than a Summer's night

I love the imagery, this is an outstanding poem.

Keep writing,

5/5 Ingrid