Burning down buildings

by Steven   Jan 23, 2006


I'm lost in my mind
i gone out of control
i needed her to be there for me
but she couldn't even be there just for a second
she left me alone in a building of terror
she left me in the hands of pain
it's like she wanted me to die
it's like she doesn't want me to ever see light again
i couldn't breath
i couldn't see
i try ed to use my last breath and ask her why ?
but she stare at me till i broke
broken down into shards of pain
i couldn't see why
she done this
but i could tell you
it's like a feeling when you burn down a building
and watch the people inside die from the burning inferno flames
watching them scream and yell for help....
i couldn't tell if it was a dream or real
but i could tell you
that she no longer loves you...

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  • 18 years ago

    by Katlynn

    Amazing job. keep it up. keep on writing. I liked how you used a burning building as a falling relationship you had or have. love always and forever.