Love it
very well written, with nice flow. a very moving story too. the language was exellent. well done

Ruby

I think that, that had a good message. I loved it. Keep up the good work. *5/5*

I thought that was very good had good meaning 5/5

Wow that is very well done

Emtions should be emotions? Iunno just letting you know lol
Great poem so much emotion into it
very intense
great job.
Love Always
NerdyPants

Wow!!! Full of emotion and it seemed like it came from your heart!!! Great write sweetie...
!^I Love Being In Love^!

I can relate with this poem alot but with me playing soccer everyone told me I was going to become great and I'm so awesome and I would be playing on like three or four teams at a time and playing every single day maybe even twice in 1 day and soon it all fell apart and I was sick of it everyone put so much pressure on me to become the best that I no longer wanted it for myself Awesome poem I loved it and I understand how you feel but I ask what did you play because I play clarinet but it's probably not that anyways Great Job!

Oh, wow! i'm speechless! i loved it so much. great job, hun. i would give you a 5, but for some reason my computer won't let me vote. well, i suppose i'm not speechless, am i? oh well, i seldom am! lol, great job.
**lisa**

I know what its like, when others try to make you something you're not...and you just want to do what makes you happy, and that confused, sad feeling, of not wanting to hurt them, yet, wanting them to accept you for who you are..its tough. great write 5/5

Great poem your really good!!!!

Wow! that was great nice job. keep it up
Emma 5/5
ps srry it took so long for me to comment.

So many of us can compare to this, I feel the same way about some of this, I understand how you feel I truely do, I may not understand how you feel your boots but I understand from my boots tho!

good job on writing this the flow was nice!

-Josiah
Volunteer Worker for FR&C