Another Excellent poems of yours. I love it. Its such a lovely yet sad poem. You portray a feeling that everyone goes through atleast once in there life. (lucky ones go through it over and over again... lol) I loved this poem, just like the others you've written. Keep it up.

Having ur luv reject just like that is so painful and i no how u feel! nice flow throughout the poem as well! nice writting and keep it up

:-) I'm glad to see that you have posted a new poem...truly beautiful I most say. Great poem Ali, you're always so amazing. Take care and keep it up. I love your poetry.

I really enjoyed this poem but the first stanza had a rhyme scheme of ABBB when all of the others had ABCB. I think this makes it slightly confusing, but other than that it was great. Nice work x

Nice poem ali.. keep it up

Fantastic.....so touching,,,,,i can relate to it dear! love reading ur poems......5/5 for this.

luv,
Bharti