Very heart warming

Well I liked it. It wasn't all that but you did your thing and thats all that matters. Keep doin what your doin

I Thought It Was Short But Good.

OMG!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! wow its amazing i love it love it love it i am very imressed welll done!!!

4 such a short poem it is great keep writing and take care sarah x

Dat was good keep it up

Wow. This is great. Great usage of similes, and I love the comparison.

Good Work. 5/5

Hey thats good... but i dont get it... haha can you explain??

Dear Jess,

If I could hold love in my hand
To help you see and understand
Meaning; sometimes people starving
for love have it right in front of them
and wont or dont see it.

The love I have shaped in a mold
Is again about to unfold
Meaning; the perfect person your
inspiration of true love once again
comes into your life melts your heart

For you my queen it is like gold
True love is new love never old
Meaning; the mold of perfection
turns to gold as with true love
forever they both shine on.

Jess, I hope this helps and thank
you for your honest comment,
Bogie

I like the poem you wrote very much becuse true love never end

I cant appreciate this poem because it is too short and no punctuation. If I were to judge this poem to see if you could win, you would deserve a big fat 0. NO comments left.
Sincerely,
lizzie

Damn! your good. its very interesting and something i can relate to!

I really enjoyed this read, a lovely sentiment of a enduring bond and promise to another, heartfelt.