Crimson fate

by bryan   Jan 23, 2006


I'm cold and I am heartless
I show no remorse regardless
No force yet uncontrolled
With no feelings but fate in my hand
I ruin lives and change planes
Recriminate blame and contrive theories
Nothing will remain the same, No one hears me
I posses Sightless eyes
In my mind I visualize
Screams that that fall on deaf ears
Dreams that turn to nightmares
Failures and success
Despair and regrets leave me a mess
A crimson puddle will drown the pain
Of a subtle solution
That is found each and every day
It ends when your heart and I collide
You realize that from the start
We were both empty inside
I'm a razor blade and this is suicide

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  • 18 years ago

    by Nil

    Good job. i love it

  • 18 years ago

    by martha shaw

    That's really good

  • 18 years ago

    by Ehsi

    Dude, thats a damn good poem....I really like it.....you a good poet...:D

  • 18 years ago

    by Emily parsons

    Wow very good
    extremely powerful
    gets the message across well
    good work
    xxxx

  • 18 years ago

    by master of shadow

    This is really good. it flows very wqell and your choise of words are very effective.

    5/5