Damn! That is a powerful poem...a brilliant metaphor for life and love. Very nicely done!

Truly a great write....powerful and well written poem...

Wow great job

Powerful, great analogy and beautifully descriptive...

Thankz for participating in my contest!

This poem is amazing. literally. it amazed me. so much vivd imagery.. even though you didnt make the top 5 you were on the 6th or 7th, (you were on my -eligible- list.

the onyl thing i dont like about this poem is that i didnt know some of the language.. and it made me kind of mad.. (i got into it too much) lol.

Defiatly a 5!
no doubt.

=]

x.x:Lauren

Amazing! good job! I like your style I have read 4 of your poems and I love them all :) keep writing my friend :)

The flow was not as good as the other i have already read(abt nature) but it was still good. i felt the emotions in it. you portrayed them very well. i also liked the overall metaphor of it. great job. =]