End of our friendship

by ~Blitz~Cat*   Jan 23, 2006


We were like beans and peas
But now look at me
I am left alone
While you are like a dog with a bone

The is bone is so delicious
and you've been so vicious(to me)
You forgot about someone who used to be a friend
Who is now in a bend

You don't know what it's like
Being without anybody alike
Aren't friends supposed to always be there?
When another friend needs to be care

All I know is that this is the end of our friendship
forever and ever
Till I find someone
Who I call a friend

PS.This is the first poem I write it may not be very good
But I'll practice and maybe it would be better next time.

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  • 18 years ago

    by Wake

    Hey..that's not bad for ur 1st poem..u started very well,and u even related things very neatly..nice job.....and im sorry for ur friend,u know ur really fortunate that u survived that crash...u shud thank god for that,i wish i had something to thank god for..lukin 4ward 2 ur next ones....

  • 18 years ago

    by Alex

    Hi!
    that is a really cool poem! especially it being your 1st! :D can't wait to see what your next ones are like :D
    luv alex