NO ONE IN MY LIFE

by Firooz   Jan 23, 2006


No one in my life i ever found who loved me
No one in my life i ever found who could peep inside
my heart and see
What i desired
When i became rude all of them left
They didnt want to know what was wrong with me
And i could not believe,and i thought how could that be?
All of them were suppose to be my friends
My broken heart they had to mend
But instead of that they left me all by my self all alone,
Lonely
But there was one person only
Who helped me out in all the difficulties of my life
Who told me how to strife
Who made me happy by her kind words and expressions
We became best friends,that were were suppose to be forever
We gave each other our heart
And promise we would never go far apart
We had a lot of fun
That was how our friendship could run
Every one said our friendship was bright
And i think they were right
Toghether we smiled with pride
Until an unlucky day arrived
And we got into a fight
We did not talk to each other
Even though both of us wanted our friendship to go further
You can say we were reluctant or may be we had our ego
very far above the ground
Ridiculous! yes it really did sound.
But no one of us apologized
both waited for the other one to come
No one of us came,
Our friendship came to an end
We both cried but no one of us still went
And that was all happened
So now i have again started saying that
NO one in my life i ever found who loved me
No one in my life i ever found who could peep inside my heart and
see what i desired

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  • 18 years ago

    by Farida Kira

    I LOVE this poem.....its poem with lots of emotions!! its vry touching.....luvd it

  • 18 years ago

    by Nicole Nolen

    Wow, this poem is deep.. really deep! you seem like a sweet caring indivual.. this has a lot of emotions in it... good job!!! keep it up!!!!!

  • 18 years ago

    by Maha

    Wow,this poem really touched me..i loved this one,keep up the good work,with sincere regards,Maha

  • 18 years ago

    by LovinMyLife

    I really liked this one. It had a lot of emotion in it. You seem real sweet. Keep it up. And it's awesome how you can write like this. Bye!
    ~SMILES~

  • 18 years ago

    by Gary Jurechka

    I really like this.It could use a little tightening up but as a whole it moves along smoothly.I really like the honesty and the emotion you convey, the honesty is bold and brutal(of yourself) and the emotions range from loneliness to sadness and desperation to happiness and hope then back to loneliness and sadness.This is one of the fe poems I've seen that actually tells a story within it's construction.Very well done.This piece really says a lot.I love how you bring it around full circle and repeat the first stanza at the end, it really adds impact.