Have a look its all from the bottom of my heart:(

Omg,i'm sorry.This is really good!!I haven't heard anything from you in awhile!!Check out some of my others,and tell me where you've been!!

ash

Me again,i'm so sorry this happened to you.you put a lot of emotion into it and I could feel the pain from reading it.very good,and again,i'm sorry.

ash

I really like this.It could use a little tightening up but as a whole it moves along smoothly.I really like the honesty and the emotion you convey, the honesty is bold and brutal(of yourself) and the emotions range from loneliness to sadness and desperation to happiness and hope then back to loneliness and sadness.This is one of the fe poems I've seen that actually tells a story within it's construction.Very well done.This piece really says a lot.I love how you bring it around full circle and repeat the first stanza at the end, it really adds impact.

I really liked this one. It had a lot of emotion in it. You seem real sweet. Keep it up. And it's awesome how you can write like this. Bye!
~SMILES~

Wow,this poem really touched me..i loved this one,keep up the good work,with sincere regards,Maha

Wow, this poem is deep.. really deep! you seem like a sweet caring indivual.. this has a lot of emotions in it... good job!!! keep it up!!!!!

I LOVE this poem.....its poem with lots of emotions!! its vry touching.....luvd it