This poem is really good, dude you have to come over to my house this weekend, we have to talk about stuff.

Hey dude. I luv your style even though it cramps mine. j/k. You should come to folly's this weekend cause my bands playing in it. lay
-David-

Wow...that is absolutely B.E.A.U.T.I.F.U.L.!!! words every girl loves to hear :D take care,
-xXx-

WOW another great poem Robert..Joclyn

Hey i loved ur poem i agree w/Fighter every girl would love to here this...good luck w/ her!

Its cool...either u wrote it with fatman..but they rock.....
-maggie-

O-m-g i feel the same way about this guy at school! and it is really hard to tell them how you feel! aint it?

I love this poem, 5/5

Switch, I like this poem, reminfs me of the poems I write myself, very nicely done!!!

Thanks for the comment on my poem, as for your comment as to the extra syllable. I thoutght "I'd" counted as one and not two - as well as "can't" and alike...

Aww that is so cute thnxs for commenting..i recommend most of my poems but please read Your Love Goddess, Goodbye Goodbye and what ever else intrests you..you wont regret any of it. thnxs so muchc..keep writing this touched my heart in ways u'll nvr know.

Lissa