Fallen Angel

by aaron c s   Jan 23, 2006


Love awaits the fallen angel.
Crimson heart beating strong.
Gravity can't hold it down,
Even though it's been there all along.

Wings shattered and broken,
Can no longer fly,
But still awaits,
For love to come by.

Mend the wings to fly again,
To feel the heart beat once more.
To fly high in the sky,
And let loves feelings soar.

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  • 18 years ago

    by Ed or Ian Henderson

    Yep, the second stanza IS too short. I mentally inserted "a moment" after "But still awaits" and it did seem to read better. I don't know what you others think, but that gave it a much nicer structure.

  • 18 years ago

    by ShadowDancer

    Not bad. the second stanza was a bit shoter then the others. and hte thrid line 'but still awaits' didnt really fit the rhythem the pom had taken.

    still, a really nice idea, and great imagry

    Ruby

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