Interesting. Long time no see stranger!

Brilliant...
different to anything ive read before
loved the whole idea and the structure
mwahhhh
speak soon hunni
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I did like your poem and thought it was brilliantly written however I thought something was missing. I felt like you could have kept going and maybe even brought more feeling into it. I did really like it though...I couldn't vote on it because although it was great I felt it a little incomplete so I didn't know how to vote on it. With that said I think you do have a great talent as a writer

A stanza or two more with this sort of energetic rhythm and superb vision and it's most definitely one of the best I've seen on here.

Keep up the good work.