by DevilWithin
Awww hun I know how that feels just hang in there things will soon be alright, love ur peom and keep writting. xoxo Rach xoxo |
by Xx_Gen_xX
Hey, OMG that is rally well written, i agree, i know how you feel, but ijust wanna say that is deep.... wow u make me think.... |
by xlovelostx
That describes how I feel most of the time. It's pretty good poem. Keep writing and thank you very much for commenting I'm glad you liked my poems! |
by Lucy Lewin
Hey thanks for the comments on my poems! This poem is Really really good! I like it. I can really relate. |
by cassanova
I like that poem alot....hey if u liked that last poem i wrote (i personally didnt) i have made a top ten out of all my poemsm, mostly sad love poems.i would really like if u read them i think u could relate.read "he died from a brokenheart".... thanx for your comment. |
I love ur poems. and please don't die cuz then you'd have no more poems for me to read. |
Thanx for the comment on my poem |
by Becky
Yet again great emotion, I feel that emotion and feeling is what makes a good poem a good poem, cuz without it, it's all fake. I know how you feel, I have been hurting for about 11 years and I don't truly want to die, but I just want the pain to stop. Dying is the only answer I ever seem to find. But it's not the only answer to keep trying and be strong,if I have done it for so long so can you. And tell someone find a friend you can confide in, even if it is someone online like me. I would be mroe than happy to isten and help. 5/5 |
by aimee
Wow I'm not sure to say that so incredable great work, |
by lonelynow
I love this poem, i know exactly how u feel. |
by Beckie
Beautiful poem, i couldn't stop reading |