by Lauren Waszkiewicz Jan 23, 2006
category :
Sadness, depression /
other
You can hear his headphones blaring |
Wow this is amazing.. I just loved it.. the flow the message and the word choices were beautiful.. This poem helped me to remember that just because you realize something is wrong it doesnt do any good unless you do something about it. Wow I really loved this poem soo much! nice work! |
by Megann Lee
Very nice. I like it, the flow and rythym was perfect. Great Job. |
by azlan26
The last stanza was amazing, and the whole poem reflects a society of misunderstanding |
by Danielle
AWESOME poem!!! |
by Loulou
Wow this is so good the thing i love about it is you can relate to it nowadays |