Sweet poem, though you have basic rhymes

That was a very nice and touching poem...definatley a 5/5...i just got into a relationship about a week ago..I like her alot..but hopefully we will sty together long enough for me to feel that way about her like u do about this person....great poem though

Take care
David

Good poem . you used very common rhmes though and you used the word 'finally' a lot lol. but whatever. Hotness.

Very sweet! thats a lovly poem. some lines seem a bit short, but it flowed very nicey.

Ruby

I would have to say, it's not very original, i've read amny like it but my favorite part that stood out to me the most was this one

So now I walk along this road
With the man who broke the secret code;
My search for love is finally done
Love has finally won

The end was good, but i think the rest of the poem could be better. but keep writing

Nice write. Genuine, emotional and real. Wish you happiness with him in the years to come. 5/5

Hey, Nice poem. It had a really great rhyming pattern. I loved the verse 'Stay together till our lives have passed
I hope these feelings will forever last;
Last in my heart because I know this to be true,
That I...will always love you' I thought it was really sweet.
Keep writing. Bec xx

Sweet poem!!! love it^^

Aww - such a sweet poem - I only wish I could relate :)

Peace. [Sole]