Secret Code (revised 1/18/06)

by authum darkness   Jan 23, 2006


I walk along these empty streets
Looking up at the cold, gray sky
Dreaming all but empty dreams
Doing this, I begin to cry

My soul is bleak
No one flashes me a glance
Why am I so meek?
When will I have my chance?

My eyes are glazed
My body seems hollow
I'm stuck in a maze
That I'm doomed to follow

My heart has cracked
This life is forlorn
Loving has been something I've lacked
I shall forever mourn

Does he love me?
Will he ever come around?
Can I ever make him see?
Am I even being sound?

He always makes me smile
He inspired me to write
Maybe I'm in denial
But he made me believe in love at first sight

He's like music playing in my head
I try to go on with the day
But I think of him instead
And when I'm around him, I never know what to say

I think back to the past,
To all the fun we had
I wish those days could last
Forever, so I'm never sad

My life is one big dream
I am lost and never found
And if I should scream
Would it even make a sound?

So I walk along this road
I shouldn't fret or pout
For love must be some secret code
I can't quite figure out

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  • 18 years ago

    by LuvMeAlwayz

    Love is a misery, no on can figure out , great poem

  • 18 years ago

    by Daze

    This was a really good poem, it brings back memories from what I used to feel and be like. my favorite part was

    He's like music playing in my head
    I try to go on with the day
    But I think of him instead

    until I got to the end,

    So I walk along this road
    I shouldn't fret or pout
    For love must be some secret code
    I can't quite figure out

    those lines are really good and stood out to me the most, 5/5 good job

  • 18 years ago

    by David Marshall

    This poem was awsome and creative...and love is very confusing...just like on one of my quotes say..love can be the worst or best thing thats ever happened to you...but if the love is real..then nothing can stand in its way...i liked that poem alot...i sometimes try to figure out how love works myself...ive been in love 1 time..and she tore my heart apart..but now i met another..and shes alowly healing me...its what love can do..good poem..5/5

  • 18 years ago

    by LadyPearl

    Awesome topic, yes, love is some sort of secret code. keep it up

  • 18 years ago

    by NannO

    Omg.. this is amazingly gr8.. i love ur rhyme and ur flow.. most of all, ur words and emotion depicted in the poem is almost overwhelming.. gr8 job with this.. i especially love ur last stanza.. gr8 job
    definitely a 5/5
    take care
    NannO

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