Awwww hun that was really will done and i'm sorry for all that, it was beatifully written loved it.xox Rach

That was beautiful! I loved it, it brought tears to my eyes on how familys can somtimes be these days. Great job i felt your pain....and you wrote it really well

I agree with those two, it was really written well. i think the feeling you put into it really shows, a wonderfull write, well done!

Doesn't sound like sibling rivalry to me. keep it up

Nicely done. I'm sorry about the tremour you went through... but your emotions were well expressed... very sad indeed. Hope everything is better now. 5/5

J. Lau

I like this. It was well written, like the ones before me said. You can feel the emotion in it. Its very sad. Hope things get better for you.

--*NaydeeN*

Another great poem, soo sad. bein in an abusive relation is always hard weather its you dad brother or boyfriend!!! be strong and know your not to blame!!
~~Sweetie

Excellent a lot of emotion in there!!It was really good, the flow was great and the topic was unique............

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-annmarie