by alexandra
I like this conflict between the boy and girl.. its really good |
by one.love
It was really good. |
by Charles
I enjoyed this poem a lot. |
I can't even express what i'm feeling. this was bloody amaing. im actually shaking, it was so good. so powerful, so creative, so passionate, so intelligent and so much more. i can't believe it. this was written wonderfully. the words flowed and were arranged brilliantly. i don't know how you did it but i'm glad you did. i'm still in a state of wonderment astonishment, i truly am. i loved it to the absolute end. i loved the first part, but this one blew it out of the water by far. so in short, to sum up my feelings towards this masterpiece...WOW! just WOW! |
by dora
W0w great use 0f w0rds in this 0ne/. very beautifully written. t0uching heartfelt very well written. great j0b darl |
This was SO good :) Keep it up :) |
by *Charisma*
I love how you tell stories. I really like too that you use long sentences when writing. Mine are often short...but I've got a couple like yours. Good job! Jpoet* |