Live and Let Go *Nick*

by Torn   Jan 23, 2006


When you go,
I'm not sure what I\'ll feel.
I'll probably be thinking,
Is this actually real?

I know I'm happy now,
For you and what you can be.
A chance to start new,
And in a new light, finally see.

I know that I will miss you,
More than I think you know.
You were always there for me,
When I was feeling so low.

It's going to be hard,
To watch you go away.
But I'll never be alone,
Cause in my heart you'll always stay.

I just hope you don't forget me,
And the girl I used to be.
And come back to the new Anna,
Cause you've finally set me free.

Enjoy yourself nick,
Live and let go.
I want you to be happy and smile,
All this I do know...

*Have the best time in Sweden nick..glad we finally sorted things out i guess.

>>Take care everyone..sorry Ive been away lately..Love u all xoxo
could u help me with a title!?

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  • 18 years ago

    by JAY Poet

    Great poem i loved it so much!!!

  • 18 years ago

    by The Wingless

    Yay! I am getting better at commenting. Look at the length of that comment!

    haha

  • 18 years ago

    by The Wingless

    Well it seems you have a title now.
    Yes, I did go on vacation, you were correct, it was needed, it was more of like a vacation from life, I didn't go anywhere I just didn't think as much, I just tried to live my life carefree for a while, and now I am re-energized to start life all over again.

    So anyways, about the poem.

    As always you come strong and the poem hits me right in the heart with a baseball bat... It's wonderful and I can really feel it inside of me, I could understand each word, it's as if the poem became a part of me.

    And also, it's very sad that you are losing someone you cared about, I hope everything will be alright, I would really hate to lose one of my really good friends.

    And I don't know how many times I have said the past,

    But the rhyming scheme is wonderful, I love that the rhymes are not forced that everything is so correct and all that. It's a perfect poem.

    This will definitely be in my mind for a while.

    Thank you for sharing this poem, and please keep up the good work.

  • 18 years ago

    by Avellana

    :( So sad.
    It's horrendous when someone you love leaves you. Even if it only for a short period of time and they're coming back.

    Good to read your poems again.

    Lv A, x

  • 18 years ago

    by BeautifulDisaster

    Aw hun, i know you've told me about him leaving before, aw, im so sorry, but sometimes people have to leave you and you have to learn to let them go, and I think you're learning that very fast, great poem btw, take carexxoxoo

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