Excellent, it flows briliantly and the rhyme is so fluent and natural.Impressive xkimx

Very impressive....it was very well organized and I was caught from the beginning.

That was VERY well written. it was such a refreshing piece of work cause it flowed so well and the rhyme was far from forced. And I LOVED the build up, seriously that last stanza was SO powerful. I really enjoyed it, very well done!

Full of emotion and an amazing job... This is a wonderful poem.. Keep it up sweetie...
!^I Love Being In Love^!

Wow, this is really great. i love the feel to it. it's wonderfully written as well. i dont even know what to say... wow 5/5

Wow, this is really great. i love the feel to it. it's wonderfully written as well. i dont even know what to say... wow 5/5

What an ending! very nice poem, with a great flow. well done!! the language was good, and teh story line was well established. a very nice peice of work.

Ruby

Great poem, it flows very well and tthe rhyming seems natural and unforced. the story is very clearly protrayed too

5/5

That was amazing! Pure imagination at work! Everything flowed perfectly and everything just seemed to fit. I could actually feel the pain the girl was going through.... and your poem really touched my heart! I loved it!

I like - i like a lot =) it was very creative and followed a nice flow!!! well done!!! 5/5 =)

I LOVE THIS i really do it is soooo good wow great job you r an excellent writer kepp writing

love always
tabby

The flow was good very good poem
great job but i dunno i think the ending left me hanging lol i didnt expect the ending to be so .. plain ..
cuz it was all so extreme the ending didnt really fit but it was till amazing
great job.
Love Always
NerdyPants
(Just my opinion so it doesnt mean anything dont take any offense by it please.)

This was so amazing, and wonderfully written. rape is the worse thing to deal with, and its very rare you find someone who can actually have a poem thats as amazingly written as this one

That was so beautifully written. I think that you are a very talented writer. Keep up the good work. *5/5*

Wow that was great. it was so beautiful. i loved it. keep up the great work.
Emma 5/5

Wow, i gotta admit i usually don't reckon much topoems about a diary or notebook because they can be really really crap but, well you did a great job. There was alot of emotion and it flowed very well. well done!

Thank you for commenting on confusion. i haven't submitted in a while so it was really great to get some feedback.

I love it it was great great job keep it up you have talent

Wow avery this is so good. i can completely relate! greta poem.

Wow avery this is so good. i can completely relate! great poem.

Wow! That was so well written. It was very suspensful and the ending was definetly a surprize. Extremley nice job hun. You most definelty have me impressed. Please keep it up!

sammie