Last Good-Bye

by AwakeInDreamin   Jan 23, 2006


Our love so strong,
held up high,
together for so long,
then we had to say good bye.

I told you I'd always love you,
i thought it was true,
i cry for losing you,
even when i already knew.

Our love so weak and old,
alone i stand,
without you I'm extremely cold,
just like our love washed away in the sand.

It could have lasted,
it you didn't leave,
except you blasted,
you just had to believe.

Our love so strong,
held up high,
lasted so long,
Now i have to say it for the last time, Goodbye my love.

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  • 17 years ago

    by luna bella

    Suchc a sad poem bot a great read

  • 17 years ago

    by StOrY oF a GiRL

    WOW I really like this poem of yours oh and thanks for the comment :P

  • 17 years ago

    by Jenni Marie

    Awwh, this was so sad, yet such a pleasure to read.
    You did a wonderful job.

  • 18 years ago

    by Danielle

    Really a great poem! I loved it.

  • 18 years ago

    by Fits

    Great poem... Truely Great, Simple.. Awesome, I like it very much so. At age 13 you are very good, I can only imagine how great you could become. Anyways... Thanks for another wonderful poem. Really thank you.