Blair, thank you for the comment on my poem.

This has nice flow to it, but it broke down in two places, with quick fixes...the word "warn" I'm sure was meant to be "warm" and the next to last line, the word "no" was meant to be "know"....make these changes and read it out loud...it will flow much better. I love the passion and pace of this write...it is very good. Keep writing with your heart...write what you feel and you will never fail.