Good work! that was really sad but i can definitely relate. i am going through something very similar right now and i have written 2 new poems just about that. you have a way with words and you give the readers a clear understanding of the way you feel. keep up the good work....and if you dont mind, check out my latest... "resisting the blade" and "i am not alone" i really appreciate the feedback. i like to know what readers think about my work. keep writing girl i look forward to reading more

I really liked you poem