Comments : The Suicide

  • 18 years ago

    by Hayley

    Wow, i love this poem, its amazing. this is my favorite part: If I die before I wake
    Tell him my heart is his to take
    Tell him I'm sorry for all of this
    I would have gave anything for one more kiss
    And when I'm found in the light of dawn
    Just know that you did nothing wrong
    ....its really good, deff 5/5 keep it up ! comment on one of mine sometime ! peace-hayley

  • 18 years ago

    by ScarletHaze

    Dark hun very dark but brill xox