Undecided path

by Xx_Gen_xX   Jan 24, 2006


Do you ever look, in the mirror,
not happy with what you see?
thats the story of my life, thats the story of me...

Always look one step ahead,
trying to peek into the future,
but all i see a life of dead,
a life of greif and loss,
but also a life of living,
dedicated to the cross,

But which path do i choose, a path of life, a path of nice, or a path if srtrife, a path with a knife?

to try think, to choose, will i win, or will i lose?

comments please....

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  • 18 years ago

    by XxBloodxXxDreamsxX

    Great poem. Love it

  • 18 years ago

    by casey

    Wow that poem really shows what is unique about ur poetry

  • 18 years ago

    by Absolute Broken Perfection

    I like it, and i understand how you feel.
    if you dont already cut yourself, if you dont know, please dont, it is hard to stop, just, beleive in yourself, i may not know you, but i know that everyone can make a difference, it just depends if you try, and i think you may have a talent in writing, maybe, if you do it right, it could be how you make your difference.