Your the best
by Shelly Jan 24, 2006
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U make the sun shine on the cloudiest day, u try 2 stop the rain from tumblin down ,n u always make sure the rainbow cums out after a big storm, so i guess wat im tryin 2 say here is that u pick me up wen I'm down!! |
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18 years ago
Good but i think it could use better form..the words are full of emotion..but the way they are placed the flow is distorted....fix the form and this poem will be amazing....Joc
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18 years ago
by last_petal
Your writing is good but I think you should use more deep words to make your reader feel its illiteral meaning... It's really really good....
