This is really beautiful.It has a good flow but it is the emotion that seeps into one's heart, so full of love and passion and yet a bit of longing, a hint of sadness at parting, the wanting and waiting..I love what you are saying here and I can very much relate to the sentiments.The last two stanzas are simply fantastic-so touching!A great piece.

Thank you so much. i'm glad you liked my poem. i put a little of my feelings into my poems. feeling that were a part of my past and still live within me!

god bless...