I loved you poem. It is really well written. Very Good!!!! Could relate. I like the way you put your emotions into people. It kinda makes it seem more realistic.

I love this poem a lot! Some people who write poems and try to make it rhyme it just turns out all wrong but you have a way with words to where it makes sense and sounds good.
-Sarah

This poem sound exactly how i feel, yuo are the one who has a way with words. this poem is brillant. i look forward to reading your up and coming poems. you should write a book or something

Hey i like this one lots.. i like the plot or it very diffrent and i like that.. keep up the good work 5.5

Its a very original and well written poem. I like how you put your feelings into real people. Thanks for commenting on my poem.

Amanda your a Very good Poem writer!! you have a wya with words aswell!! My papa the one i wrote that poem to, he died in 99, and i dont no why but i started to think about him the other night and just Blurred out my Feelings with those words!! it came from the heart and im So glad you liked it!! I no im only 12 so it sucked probly!! but it was how i felt from the heart!!! I REALLY like your poem it it was well Written!! and I like it oh so very much!! well i have ta go!! And thank you oh so very much!!
-Grace-

Once again That is a very touching poem. very nice work keep up the good work, i love your poems. and thank you so much for commenting on mine.